Family Uncaged

Thursday, Vacuum Day

6 Comments 18 October 2004

Today, Deborah wrote a beautiful post about how she loved to write as a child. Check it out at www.themastersartist.blogspot.com. It reminded me of my daughter Sophie, who is quite an amazing writer at eleven years old. I’m going to brag here and post a recent poem she wrote. I just finished delegating chores to each child (on each particular day). For Sophie, Thursday was vacuum day. To “celebrate,” she wrote this verse:

Thursday, My Vacuum Day

By Sophie DeMuth

Today is Thursday, my vacuum day

I will never get to go out and play

For first I clean the downstairs rug

I think my vacuum has a bug

Because when I turned the vacuum on

It gave a sudden yawn!

Then it sucked the rug right up!

Next, my sister’s stuffed toy pup

Then ate the couch, the lights, the books

The tupperware set that was Mr. Cook’s

Next went my mom’s pots and pans

My brother’s set of collectible vans

It ran up the stairs, oh who knows why

It stopped at my room and gave a sigh

It took in a deep breath and there went my room

The computer room was gone with the next big zoom

It sucked up our house and everything with it

It didn’t miss one little tiny bit!

It leaped out the back and ate our backyard

It even sucked up my experiment on lard

It paused for a moment, then gave a boom

And there, right in front of me was my old room

It gave back our house, our things and our toys

Hey, look over there, it’s my cousin Roy

Then, I opened my eyes and sat up in bed

“Honey it was only a dream,” my mom said

I looked at the calendar and noticed the day

I gave a big gasp to see it was Thursday!

Celebrating Thursday on Monday,

Relevantgirl

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  • Jeanne Damoff

    Go, Sophie!

    Her poem is a fun read. Very clever. Maybe she should take the vacuum cleaner to school and demonstrate its abilities for her “friends.” Cousin Roy might enjoy some company. ;)

  • Jeanne Damoff

    Go, Sophie!Her poem is a fun read. Very clever. Maybe she should take the vacuum cleaner to school and demonstrate its abilities for her “friends.” Cousin Roy might enjoy some company. ;)

  • Karen

    Mary, I’m glad I found your blog. I’ve been thinking of you and remembering my short time in France (2 weeks) on Work and Witness. Your daughter’s poem is absolutely wonderful. What a creative mind! I continue to keep you in prayer and hope that some Reese’s peanut butter cups will come your way on the difficult days. Chocolate always helps but peanut butter smooths things over.

  • Karen

    Mary, I’m glad I found your blog. I’ve been thinking of you and remembering my short time in France (2 weeks) on Work and Witness. Your daughter’s poem is absolutely wonderful. What a creative mind! I continue to keep you in prayer and hope that some Reese’s peanut butter cups will come your way on the difficult days. Chocolate always helps but peanut butter smooths things over.

  • katelet327

    How cute! Sophie is such a good writer! Its funny! Tell Sophie she did a great job! Wish I could write like that!
    Kate

  • katelet327

    How cute! Sophie is such a good writer! Its funny! Tell Sophie she did a great job! Wish I could write like that!Kate

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